Finally, a bit at ease now. At least, I'm not so upset, agitated, enraged, pissed as 2 days ago. Emotions are more settled. I guess there's no point continuing the emotions and have to do something to solve it.
At least during hall production meeting releases my stress abit. At least I won't be thinking too much of the negative side. Not to say absolutely not thinking, but lesser.
Totally written a brand new story. Got more people to read it, and keep amending it. Peoples' comments are needed. Definitely. Edited 4 times le. Still requires people to comment it so I can amend till I'm able to pitch on Mon, and hopefully, able to make my film. Do give me comments. I would gladly appreciate it.
At least I'll try my best to make it a good one, good story. The rest will be depended upon fate. May God bless me!
面具 (Masks)
“为了隐藏不为人知的一面，‘我’把‘他’藏了起来。‘他’永远不会不会被世人知道。。。”
人物
1． 俊 Jun，18岁，男，学生在学校里，很少跟人接触。内向的他不会主动与别人说话。有点自闭，因此常常在学校被人欺负。尽管被欺负得多惨，他从不会还手。但持续下去，他仍然会保持沉默吗？
2．衡Heng，18岁，男，学生，俊的双胞胎哥哥俊的相反。在学校里很受欢迎，是学生会会长。大家看到他，都会主动找他说话。每当其他人在他面前说俊的坏话，他都会替他弟弟打抱不平。喜欢着玲，他的同班同学。典型的模范生。然而，这样的形象能维持多久？
3．玲Ling，18岁，女，学生，俊和衡的同班同学开朗容易相处的她跟大家都能一拍即合。虽然衡喜欢她，但她却喜欢着俊。
Story
Behind the walls of the school’s gate, a group of students circled around Jun.
他们围绕着俊，不断地推他，取笑他，把他和衡做比较，例如他不如衡，怀疑他们是否是兄弟，是个哑巴等。无论他们怎么打他、骂他，他都不会还手。说着，他们又继续推俊，动作越来越粗鲁。然而，俊，他毫不啃声，任由他们继续欺负。
Then he is pushed down to the floor and being laughed at. Camera cuts in to his expressionless face despite being pushed around.
POV of Ling. Walking towards the group, staring straight at the group. The footsteps are rushed.
MLS of Ling confronting the group.
玲：你们在干吗？可以别老是欺负俊吗？他也是我们的同班同学啊！
那群男生由于不想在玲的面前使坏，便立刻住手，然后掉头跑掉。
玲伸出手想扶起俊，但俊却没握住她的手，自己站了起来。
目无表情的俊，对玲说一声谢谢，便掉头走。
CU of Ling’s face, with a disappointed look.
Next scene shows Heng walking along the school corridor, hands carrying some files and papers.As he walks, he sees a group of guys talking. When they see Heng, they greet him.
Heng greets them back and begins to chat with them. He suddenly probes a question.
衡：喂，听说你们昨天欺负我弟弟啊？
男A:啊？Ermm… 没有啦！ The guy tries to avoid the question, and his eyes shifting here and there uncomfortably, trying his best not to see Heng’s eyes.
The rest also starts to fidget about and eyes rolling uncomfortably.
衡：别想骗我。难道自己的弟弟发生的事，我会不懂？瞧你们那心虚的表情，已经露出破绽了。
男A：衡啊。。。老实说，因为我们敬佩你，而且大家都是朋友，所以我们现在才坦白跟你说。你和俊都是双胞胎，可是俊却像个自闭的小子，无论怎样欺负他，他都不会还手或啃声。他。。。是不是有病啊？
On hearing, Heng’s eyes changes from a calm mode to angry mode. He is unhappy to hear such stuff being said about his brother and defends for him. The group of friends tries to explain but Heng simply won’t listen and just walks away.
As he stomps away angrily, he keeps talking to himself that Jun need not take all this humiliation and why won’t he retaliate back. He is about to go up the stairs, he sees Ling.
MCU of Heng’s face. The angered expression melts to a happiness expression at an instant. His lips breaks into a smile.
MCU Ling sees Heng and smiles back.
LS/MLS of Ling and Heng talking.
玲：嗨，午安。Ermm…衡。。。我有东西想问你。。。不知可以吗？
Heng furiously nods his head. His eyes glimmering with happiness. He stands up straight and attentively.
玲：请问。。。请问为什么俊今天请病假？他。。。他没事吧？
After hearing her asking about Jun, his smile breaks off and not paying to attention on what she is going to say.
He replies monotonously that Jun caught a flu hence not able to come for school. Throughout the while, Ling’s face is nervous and uptight. But after hearing that he is better now, she relaxes and heave a sigh of relief. She thanks Heng and leaves.
When Ling’s back is facing Heng’s back, CU of Heng clenching his fists. His teeth gritting against one another.
Scene then fades out and fades in.
POV of Heng.
From the ‘grilled’ staircases, there is a view of the AVA room, in which the person from the stairs can see people at the AVA room but people from the AVA room can’t see him.
From one side of the frame, Ling walks in. Upon seeing her, Heng hides himself from her view, in case she sees him.
Ling knocks on the door and a guy classmate comes out, from one of the group. They chat for a while, but only their lips can be seen moving. A while later, the guy goes back to the room and Ling walks away.
(Throughout, only the Heng’s breathe can be heard and scene is shot from Heng’s POV.)
POV of Heng
On the way while taking that guy to the PE storage room, there will be a long shot of the guy being dragged by Heng, along the corridor. The guy is then being shown thrown into the ‘cage’, with the rest of the group being locked inside. This group is the same group of guys who had bullied Jun, and all with fear in their eyes.
(From the moment that Heng takes the guy away, there will be no dialogue but only music and sound effects to bring out the atmosphere.)
POV of Heng.
With fear in their eyes, one of the guys asked.
男A：为。。。为什么你。。。你要这么做。。。有话好好商量。。。
男B：我们。。。我们从来没欺负过你。。。如果是因为你弟弟的事，我们。。。我们。。。我们向你陪不是。对不起。
As he speaks finish, the rest of the group also apologizes simultaneously.
Instead of accepting their apology, Heng laughed out loud.
俊/衡：现在才说对不起，不觉得太晚了吗？又不见得你们欺负我时，说对不起。
男A：你。。。你是俊？你为什么打扮成衡？
俊/衡：哈哈哈。。。为什么你会认为我是衡？因为我的穿着像他？这倒也是。。。俊被你们欺负时，从不啃声，所以你们认为俊不会做出这样的行为，对吗？对啊。俊原本就是个孤僻的小子，老是嵬嵬索索，什么事都不说。
男A：那。。。你其实是衡？
俊/衡：衡？他那个模范生，他要保护他的形相，哪会这么做？
Suddenly, Jun/Heng clutches his head in agony and keeps saying stop it. Stop coming into my mind.
Everyone just stare at Jun/Heng. They are puzzled and shocked to see his behaviour. They have no idea who he is anymore. Jun or Heng?
俊/衡：俊也好，衡也好。那两个小子都是没用的家伙。但看到我，你们必须消失。
Jun/Heng laughs menacingly and splashes kerosene on the ‘cage’. He throws away the empty tin and flicks up a lighter, and lighting it.
Scene fades out and fades in.
Scene of Ling and Jun hanging out together. Ling is beaming cheerfully while Jun is trying his best to be natural.
MCU of Jun trying to act natural as his facial expression indicates he is tensed up. He shifts around uncomfortably. Ling then looks at him, giving him an assuring look, hinting him to relax.
She then suddenly probes a question to Jun.
玲：你和衡很奇怪。每次你在学校时，衡就生病。衡在学校时，你就生病。你们似乎相续约好轮流生病。。。
Scene fades out.
No comments:
Post a Comment